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If it's warmth you seek
I will provide it for you
   
               But I'm a fading one
               You deserve so much more




You were feeling so lonely
I wish to accompany you for eternity
    
               But the clock is ticking
               My time is waning




I want you to know
That you will always be in my memory

               But who will remember me
               As I fade ?
Before ya'll start asking whaddup with me I swear I'm not feeling depressed hahaha
I'm just getting back into poetry
[ MIND WANDERS BACK WHEN I WAS AN ANGSTY TEEN ]
But ye I'm getting rusty and English isn't my first language tbh not to mention no writing skills so ye pardon my shitty writing style   u  v  u


Basically's it's about a dying man's thoughts for his girl friend yeah  Psst not gonna lie it's really about Mia and Allan



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hitomeyaska Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014
damn you ell. Not only are you good at drawing and writting stories and rps, now you are good in poetry.
DAMN YOU ELL DAMN YOUUUU

any who. about the poem.... its really well written, you can feel the mood perfectly and the idea you transmit is absolutely clear...AND SAD:
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EllNicholas Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NAH PAU I JUST WING THINGS OMFG TRUST ME
YOU'RE BETTER THAN ME OK SHUUUSH //puts a hand on ur mouth aggressively

BUT THANKS PAU OMFG GLAD YOU THINK SO
I was worried that the message won't get across but sdkfbdskg I'm glad it did
iT'S OK I GOT BITTER AT MYSELF TOO
LET'S CRY TOGETHER
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mahura97 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
It ssems like related to me/you ?
btw nice poet senpai
make me remember with some poet by Jose ..... (tak ingat nama dia tapi yg tahu nama dengan puisi tu ada kat dalam sebuah buku nama Mendung Dilangit Yang Cerah, buku Spain yang ditranslatekan ke Malay)
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EllNicholas Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Hahaa actually it's about an OC pairing me and my friend have omfg
Nothing related to real life whatsoever ----
Hmmm
Was it Jose Rizal ?
...
NAH HE'S PHILLIPINO WHOOPS WHO AM I KIDDING
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mahura97 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Mungkin Jose Charlos kot
tak ingat la baru baca Selasa lepas
tulat nanti check baliklah :u
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KikiThePumpkinLover Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
WOW THIS IS SO GOOD AND SO AWESOME AND DEEP AND SAD AND BEAUTIFUL I CANT EVEN AHHHHHHH
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EllNicholas Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ASDFGHJ BAE THANKS OMFG GLAD YOU THINK SO
S2G I WILL NEVER STOP CRYING OVER THIS SHIP
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KikiThePumpkinLover Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
haha
dont worry Im tearing myself apart by matching ocs up with shows and movie characters TTuTT
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Donnics-sideburn Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
I CRIED SO MUCH WHILE READING THIS YOU HAVE NO IDEA
they're so great omg they manage to make me cry,,, and then laugh AND THEN CRY AGAIN
but its because theyre so soft hearted its stupid--
AND ALSO SAD
NO BUT THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL?
THINK I SAID THAT EARLIER BUT IT IS
makes me feel almost happy/sad 
had
I am had
because he loves her but also HE'S DYING 
LIKE YOU FINALLY HOOK UP WITH UR LADY 
BUT U GON DIE
its all cool though they get married yeah;;
LOOK I DID A  SLIGHTLY LONG COMMENT I HOPE U FEEL LOVED 
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EllNicholas Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
UGH TRUST ME
THEY'RE THE ONLY ONES THAT CAN DO THIS TO ME
Yes it's dumb why can't they just be like Chiron or Devon
Then we can make them do a four way hue
BUT THANKS BAE GLAD YOU THINK SO OMFG
It's okay lots of smooches and cuddles
And then 9 kids even if you're chronically ill  ;;;;;;;
YES I FEEL SO LOVED THANK YOU
AND GOOD JOB FOR U FOR A SEMI LONG COMMENT
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